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Re: 2D Art Class Artwork
Hello everyone, I have decided, considering storywritting is not my strongest talent, to upload my artwork. All this art that you will see below is done in my art class. ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Hello Yuriiko! I was wondering if you'd like to review my novel. (Titled Faith, science-fiction) Both parts of chapter 1 are out. But more chapters will follow. I would totally ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Simple Passion
Hey Isha! It's Maddy here, and I'm going to review this. I'd like to start out by saying I thought this piece had potential to be metaphoric. I thought this ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: September 2010 Stats
Yeah! 3 countries from Australia on the list. We are awesome. -high fives Jiggity-
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Nationality Headcount at YWS
American: 9 Asian: 1 Australian: 1 Canadian: 2 English: 3 Filipino: 1 Finnish: 1 French: 1 Indian: 1 Irish: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Just a little bit meticulous...
Hello there! I was wondering if you'd like to review my novel. (Titled Faith, science-fiction) So far, only chaper 1's up. But more will follow. I would totally understand if ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Faith (Chapter 1, Part 2)
-x-x-x- The man is idle. His brain is buzzing with heightened anticipation. He would get up and pace the room, if it wasn’t for his disability. A bright red phone ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: In the Pursuit of Happiness
Hey, Lena! The points you've brought up in this piece were well-explored and communicated. Although it was well-written, I felt at times you were trying to focus on just their ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Letters to Mother
Hey emoinpink, I'm maddy, and I'll be your review for today. First off, I'd like to discuss this paragraph: The voyage itself was horrid. We were forced to room together ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Faith (Chapter 1, Part 1)
NOTE: This has recieve a 16+ rating because the first part of the chapter does not reflect what the feel of the story is yet to become: a gruesome, heart-wrentching ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but now you can't get a job because your education was never assessed. I wish I could buy every song on my "want song" list.
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Poison
This is my first shot at poetry. I don't do poetry often because I know I'm far better at writing novels. But I did write it, for some strange reason. ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Unforgettable
I think we'd both agree you simply can't use the word poke. Bahaha. Anyway, I've revised it slightly so it flows better: He slammed his fist into the wall He ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: The Monster Within
Wow. You guys are fantastic. You've given me in-depths reviews I could have only dreamed of receiving. I cannot thank you enough! I've taken all your advice in and switched ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: The Monster Within
Thanks Moo, you've really pulled me up on stuff I hadn't noticed before. I definitely have a weak start and I really appreciate you pointing out my mistakes. :)
Oct 12, 2010
