Maddy

Doing a quick google search on baby names is always helpful. Plus, when I think of a character, I first think up their personality and then search for names I ...

Hey, cat! It's Maddy here today, happy to review your piece. (Random, I know! That's the beauty of Review Day!) Before I start today, I will mention that I am ...

Hey, Gracie! It so happens to be a coincidence that I love to critque songs. I am a perfectionist when it comes to the feel and wording of a song, ...

@kakagirl, Thank you! I'm really happy that it created good imagery. I was aiming for that because, like you said, fantasy relies heavily on imagery to make them work. I'm ...

Hello there Kakagirl. It's me, Maddy. I really, really DON'T INTENTIONALLY mean to kill you, but, you know, I'd LOVE a review on one of my fantasy novel chapters. It's ...

NOTE: The second chapter is not up, due to a malfunction on my sister's computer. I don't know if I can recover the file yet, but since the third one ...

Hey, Lily! If you wouldn't mind, I do have a beginning chapter that I would really love a review from you on. Here's the link: Thank you! -Maddy

Hey there, Dreamy! Since you are featured, and you are a fellow fan of VPM, I shall take my time to review this. I haven't found any nitpicks, but I'll ...

This is a story for my lovely little brother Declan. Most of the story is his idea, so if at times it sounds cliche, I'm blaming him. NOTE: The title ...

Hey there, I'm Maddy, and I'll be reviewing your piece today. :D Nitpicks: Standing in the center of the room, stood a man with a white beard and a purple ...

Hey, Ice! Just going to give you a quick review. :) Damn, this is so much better then my entry. I feel dishearted that I don't stand a chance against ...

@awegs , @PinkShearwater and @Azila , Thank you all for your wonderful help! You've made me re-think, and I've elaborated on the parts that might have made you confused. :D

The thing that really bugs me is someone who over-exagerrates kindness to their superiors, and over-exagerrates nastiness to their inferiors. For example, take a bratty child. She sweet-talks when the

Baby dear, take our love. It was never ours to give, but we know you'll accept it. It was a cold, crisp morning the day we discovered you. We were ...

Ash and Em, I love it. :) I believe the hook rockstarz was taking about could easily be communicated throught the tone and power of the voice singing it. And ...