Maddy

Thanks to the wonderful advice from the talented reviewers here on YWS, I have revised a section of my chapter in my novel and I would now like to see ...

Honestly, if someone told me to study a book outside of school, I'd scream. When you read and find something interesting or worth remembering, write it down. Don't study a ...

Hey WD, i'd love if you could review a piece of my story. What to look out for is writting on the post. Sparrowhawk Soar (a excerpt 3/4 way through ...

Thanks a heap, Sanareth, your advice was very useful. :)

Hello Pudin, I'm Maddy and I'll be reviewing your work today. I am probably not the most nicest critic because I do pull apart stories and get down to business. ...

Sparrowhawk Soar (an excerpt, 3/4 the way through) Fantasy Fiction The word count of the excerpt is 1,329 Could you please tell me if the flow of the sentences makes ...

Hello, my name is Maddy and I'll be reviewing your work. I'm quite a nice critique (but I do rip thing pieces by pieces, as a heads up), and specialise ...

Amelia trudged on, looking down at her perfectly shaved legs. The slop of runny, crap-coloured mud had ruined all that time she spent in the morning moisterising. Lightning slashed across ...

Aaah, so I see now what they mean by "Showing and telling". :) This is great!

Wow, this is great advice! I often have trouble with dialogue. I never thought to use rhythm to differentiate characters and to make the speech more believable. Thanks for writing ...

This is another snippet ( It is NOT the beginning of the story, rather 3/4 into, so not everything is explained ) of my novel I'm writting. I need some ...

Hey Elinor, great story! I love the plotline and you certainly kept me hooked. I have devoured through 41 pages so far, editing and adding advice. It's mainly advice though, ...

"Somewhere where I can hear the ocean waves roll and collapse on the sand." ~Talia "The best place for a honeymoon would definitely be the Bull Fight in spain.. or ...

Hmm, sounds to me like a book reflecting on someone's shady/terrible past? It reminds me of autumn days and sepia. Probably something that I might read the blurb for. Newborn ...

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