Maddy

Whew! I just finished nitpicking your story. And I have to say that I love it. Just a few minor errors here and there, but fantastic. The code for deciphering ...

Hello Lord Anzius, This is great! I liked this introduction, it bought the reader staight into the action. I would give one piece of advice though: You don't even need ...

Okay, I rated it (E), because although it is a horror story, it is designed in goosebumps-format.

Sorry, Shubhi, but what do you mean by "rating"? Does it means telling you to rate it out of /10 or something?

I'm not going to nitpick this, because it seems, by the reviews above me, that pleasure has been stripped away. I just want to say: THAT WAS TERRIFIC! Honestly, a ...

So my brother, being a fantatic Goosebumps fan, has asked me for his birthday a personlized Goosebumps story just for him. So I took one of his radical horror ideas ...

Hey BlueSkies, I'm Maddy, nice to meet you! Glad you found your way to our quaint, small society. Hipe you enjoy your time here. -Just a few tips to make ...

Thanks for writing this! Dialogue is my biggest issue when coming to terms with editing my work. I see now where i've gotten it wrong in the past. I am ...

Lydia: I can't believe i've never noticed that before. I've never been taught that grammar rule (obviously) and I thought my dialogue was fine. By you pointing it out to ...

Hmm, thanks for your advice Karsten. Honestly, I didn't do as much proofreading as I would've of liked before posting it on here. I didn't want Talia to come across ...

Hey Jaimini, i'm Madz, and I will be your reviewer for today. I'm going to nitpick this alot, because although it has potential plotwise, the grammar is awful. I'm sorry, ...

This was really great to read, Ski. The emotion of the piece shone through and was a terrific read. I do have a little error I've noticed in your work, ...

Hey Lydia, here's a piece of a chapter from my realistic/fantasy novel i'm writing. I've just edited it and I need an opinion on how it reads. Thanks in advance!

Hey Shubi (if that's your name :P) I would love in you could review this. It's a exert from my realistic/fantasy fiction novel i've recently edited. Thanks in advance!

Hey Marine, this is an except from my novel i'd recently edited. COuld you please take a look and see what you think? Thanks!