Maddy

Gracie, this is really quite nice. It's simple, the lines work well and it has a straightforward message that almost everyone can understand. The only thing I would recommend is ...

Hey, Lumi! :) I'm going to start by saying this was adorable. Truly. Azila and Persephoneia should be flattered. I did, however, find some (minor) errors: Gracie was a bit ...

Hi, Rachael! Hmm, I guess Kakagirl kind of covered it all. I was going to mention all of the said above, but stopped just in time. Thank goodness. Anyhow, welcome! ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED Name: Maddy. If you can't remember that, my username is always helpful. ;) Age: Fifteen rolling into 16. What you write: It varies! My strongest point is ...

Hey Mother, wake up! Yes, open your eyes. Stare up at me. I have a story to share. I was at school today, As you are aware, And I met ...

Hmm, yes! An influx of work! My fingers are itching to review them.

Hey, Kima, here to review your piece. :) I'll start by saying I couldn't read this easily. Why? a) your timing and rhythm was completely off in some places which ...

Hey, Sophs! (Is it okay if I call you that?) :P I'm just going to come straight out of my (cardboard :P ) box and say I thoroughly enjoyed this ...

Hi, Jane! -outstretches hand- I'm Maddy, as you have probably seen by my username. Original, right? ;) Anyway, welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll meet people on here that fit ...

NOTE: This entry had to be less than 500 words. It currently sits at 499! :D So please, I'm not looking to add to it, but I am looking for ...

If you're reading over some work you've just finished, and it's sounding dull, and you've been through it and added some fancy words and put in some more action and ...

Waiting, of course.

Oh, I was supposed to post this in the lyrics section! Whoops. XD

Yes, I did say I was going to review your work. But I'm not an always nice reviewer. I can be tough, blunt, a perfectionist and cruel, but above all ...

Tell me nothing’s going to fall from beneath me, For my world is unsteady as it is I need you to convince me that I felt something real Then maybe ...