MadamCharlotta

I really enjoyed the use of imagery in this piece. I like the way you almost use the words in a way which gives it such a song like quality. ...

This is really good. You have description down and the imagery that is brought into the mind is sublime. I enjoy the use of language too. Top stuff xx

Blood clots formed over her new cuts, and she collected them on the blade looking interested and fulfilled with how they looked on the razor sharp entity. Her eyes scanned ...

Sympathy is a Sin. Thick and running through my lips, Drenching my body in its darkness, Bleeding out from the hole which is my heart. Making me retch and and ...