Young Writers Society

Funny how so many things around us are humorous without trying to be. The poem was quaint. I think if you really wanted to make this a good poem and ...

Yes, I wondered that as well. No matter what it is, it's still cliche. Just listening to my favorite CD, my favorite band, I hear so many songs basically singing ...

I liked that a lot. Very, very, very demented. The last line really packed the punch. It really emphazied what you were trying get across. I really have no clue ...

Wow, you seem to be posting a lot of stories lately. You really should do some more reviewing (even though your post-review ratio is better than mine) I agree with ...

Okay, what is up with this poem? I didn't even finish this poem simply because you kept switching between first person and third person. Not to sound rude but that ...

Hey, I've read a lot of your stuff lately. I'm getting used to your writing style. I like the repetition, it really emphaized the point you wanted to get across. ...

Hey, I liked your poem. Very well written, and may I say somewhat creepy. You really have no clue what's happening. It really makes you think. But, I can't possibly ...

The title alone got me to read it. "w00t" is a really good title simply because chatspeak is rarely used in good writing. Well, somewhat good writing. I felt that ...

Okay, I hate to break it to you, but this isn't very good as those above me have said. I felt it conveyed a emotion fairly well, but the writing ...

I agree with Azila. This piece was quite short and more like a joke than a story. If you want this to be a story, elaborate so more. Do something ...

This is a really good poem. Kind of creepy. The main concept of this story is very well portrayed. But you want to know what killed it? The repetition. Like ...

Your poem was, well, choppy. I know poetry can be written any way you choose, but this was a bit to odd (For lack of a better word.) Maybe you ...

That was really good. I'm not much for love story poems, but your poem changed my view on them. I actually read it about 10 times to find any mistakes. ...

A very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. Christmas horror story. My god it sounds like I wrote it! I have to disagree with most people on saying the "partridge ...

I felt this piece terribly disjointed and, dare I say, random. The flow, well, there was no flow other than the river you were talking about (heck I don't even ...