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Re: Bill's Dilemna
Par 3: "I don’t yet have its coordination back." Maybe "my coordination" instead of "its". Par 4 "...and I shudder to think" You can probably leave out everything after "had ...
Dec 19, 2006 -
Re: A Romance
strange lightning crackles when near, crush split swift away, aches soothes stings forgets Time removes all things, makes them again. Each thing discharges and absorbs energy. Each thing changes and ...
Dec 19, 2006 -
Re: WORK IN PROGRESS
Advice from another person: "The story was OK, not much emotion, not much excitement. Sort of drab, I have to admit. Try to spice it up." I completely disagree, this ...
Oct 1, 2006 -
Re: Cold (But I'm Still Here)
Hello you! Thanks for the fun read! I don't want to post my full reply here because it will be hard to read. Instead I'll be sending you a word ...
Oct 1, 2006