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REVISED Thank you Niobe and Griffinkeeper for all your helpful comments. This is Chapter One, all edited...yay! All comments, crits, suggestions welcome. Eolenel Chapter One – Eventide 'The Nefer's

I liked the simple rhyme scheme, because its not forceful it gives the piece a nice flow. I only have one critique. In the last line of the first stanza, ...

Return of the King Soundtrack - Into the West

Nice and fantasy oriented. 8.

10/10 - Awesome quote! I actually just finished a midterm project on her.

I got into a fight with my computer, it lost and I had to furnish myself a new one, thuis my absence from the site.

forest_ofthe_nightingale: thank you, I love them too! JigSaw: Lo! Isfet, oooo I likey... tata for now, Maat

Thankies all. ºMaatº

oh that was a good laugh...I needed to, pure genius being a TECHIE myself in highschool hey is it okay if I send this to my friend Ryan? later hon, ...

My first story was about my stuff animal, a white cat named Yominko that I took everywhere with me. Albeit I wrote it when I was about 6. Jack, you ...

7.5, the first one is nice, but I especially like the last two...the monkey one is funny. §Maat§

^ his arvie has a ram's head on his breastplate and is cool cause he watches Firefly

As Mattie said, it seemed more of a song to me than a poem. A bit prose-ish, is that even a word? But I like it, that you could take ...

hmm... I liked this, I am not about to shout at the top of my lungs off the top of the Golden Gate Bridge that it was amazing, but I ...

-the general term for anything of obsidian color.- TBR: hey you answered with 'no' I thought the point of the game was that you couldn't answer with no/yes/black/white?.... What color ...