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Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]
Can you review one of my novel chapters? It would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.(: --Maya
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter 1 (rewrite)
This is fantastic. You definitely have a serious talent. "Either way I'm going to hate what you wrote. Even if it's any good I'll wish I had written it. Therefore, ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Inspired
Hello, fantastic job here.(: I thought since you wrote such a great review on my piece I should return the favor. Overall I really enjoyed your poem. At first, I ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever wondered?
Hello all, Just to clarify, I did write this while insanely sleep deprived. So I guess that should explain all of the random spelling grammarical and spelling errors, right? Yes. ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: A Series of Events
Unlike what you said in your post, I enjoyed this poem very much. I liked how it brought me into a different place so easily. Fantastic description! Bravo. It was ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Distant Chains
First of all I would like to say that you are a great writer! I like how you kept your poem short and simple, I really enjoyed it. And the ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: My Life and Writing
Well, I wrote this two years ago, but I thought I should post it anyways because I'm kinda proud of it. It is an autobiography and everything that happens to ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Bob the Tumor
This is just fantastic. Great, humorous dialogue. I seriously think you should turn it into a novel or something. I would definitely read it. I think it's fantastic how you ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Fruitless Tree
Good poem, had great rhythm. Thank you for posting so that others may enjoy it as well! Keep on writing.(: --Maya
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Memories of a Star
This is a good story so far. I can tell you've put a lot of time into writing it which makes it all the better. I'm unsure of where this ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go
I can't believe I'm the first to reply, this poem is amazing. Really, you have a talent. It is very sad, but I guess that's the best part about it. ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Days Teach Me
Days teach me To always dream However, it may never come true But that's the best way To live my life through. Days teach me To dream so high Never ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Oh, Marissa Marissa
Bravo, this is a fantastic poem you have here.(: good job! "Was that your swords were blunt, your weapons dull" --I dont know what it is about this line, but ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: I Pity You
This is a very good poem. I can feel your emotion as you tell it! Bravo.(: "You used to say 'You’re my friend'". This line is very good, it's something ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: From the Inside- Chapter 4
You are a very talented writer. Not only that, but I have a lot of respect for anyone who tries to tackle writing a novel. I love the discription you ...
Oct 23, 2011
