MMurray

Hi :) I'm new too ! I haven't always had a passion for writing until my english teacher told me one day after class that i had a good imagination ...

Ok, I like the whole idea and setup that you have for chapter 1. some pointers i would give are you can break up the paragraphs to just one sentence.I ...

Please make this longer ! I caught my attention in the first sentence. It's very well written. I loved the part where you wrote "The worst part wasn't that I ...

Overeasy I totally see what you mean>i'm deeply sorry that the formatting was so poorly done. Please if you would try to read it again.thanks and sorry again

I liked it Adeera ! It was very good.I especially liked the part "...that Jarem had always had what you could call a liking for me" very cool and funny.

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What Happened The Beginning of Silivrenniel "Gwen, you there ?" I head voice all around me while my head was spinning in circle. "Ugh , Wh...wh...wh...where am I ?" I ...

Yeah I saw the title "Saving Lilly" and immediately was hooked.You should check out my prologue The Girl with The Cheetah Scar. I'm almost done with the chapter 1 and ...

You gotta hurry up and get the 5th chapter out ! I'm dyin in suspense here !

Adeera I really like Chapter 2. I could mentally pictured the whole chapter 2 happening in mind. Keep up the good work! Would you please check out my prologue The ...

Prologue I ran with great speed, an unknown creature following quickly behind. I glanced behind me with my hair whipping in my face my dad who may already be dead. ...