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MHolly507

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The People of Heaven

    Then again I'm sure some would find my views offending. Carry on.

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The People of Heaven

    I actually found it a bit offending... not towards me personally. As a poem it's great, but I wouldn't shout it out in public. I like your use of symbolism, ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Apology

    To add to my previous post.. Thank you for your reviews!!!

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Apology

    Re: PheonixBishop Whether we meant well matters not After all, who would believe us? This a bit confusing. Meant well at doing what? And who is there to believe us ...

    Jul 10, 2010


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