MHolly507

I realize I am a new member. So, if what I say is out of line please let me know. It is a poem. So as long as it was ...

It's cold outside and warm in here But I don't deserve the warmth Wiping away my tears of fury I run from the place I'd been born My decisions haunt ...

Then again I'm sure some would find my views offending. Carry on.

I actually found it a bit offending... not towards me personally. As a poem it's great, but I wouldn't shout it out in public. I like your use of symbolism, ...

To add to my previous post.. Thank you for your reviews!!!

Re: PheonixBishop Whether we meant well matters not After all, who would believe us? This a bit confusing. Meant well at doing what? And who is there to believe us ...

Des, It's beautiful work and well written. As an aspiring philosopher I absolutely loved it. It was a bit hard for me to make it flow at first... perhaps work ...

We are a kind of many sins And few qualities to redeem us Whether we meant well matters not After all, who would believe us? Contaminating Mother Earth And poisoning ...