M4ple

thankyou for your review I haven't really written a book before and i will really keep this to mind when extending and hopefully improving the story truly I meant this ...

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Points: 518 Reviews: 2 DonateTue Oct 29, 2024 7:27 pm M4ple wrote a review... I love this concept so much, the characters are very well explained and developed keep up ...

i found this story very engaging and extremely vivid in its action colour and intensity it was very inresting to see how you expressed what the charaacters felt and how ...

i really like the language used keep up the good work and i hope you keep your very strong passion of writing