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Re: The Infinite void - Chapter 2
This chapter feels a little fast paced in its storytelling one way you could improve this is adding more commas or things t break up the paragraph in parts where ...
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Re: 1: The New Way Home
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Oct 29, 2024
Points: 518 Reviews: 2 DonateTue Oct 29, 2024 7:27 pm M4ple wrote a review... I love this concept so much, the characters are very well explained and developed keep up ... -
Re: The Infinite void - Chapter 1
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Oct 29, 2024
Points: 518 Reviews: 2 DonateTue Oct 29, 2024 7:27 pm M4ple wrote a review... I love this concept so much, the characters are very well explained and developed keep up ... -
Re: Chapter 2 - AHHHH!!!
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Oct 29, 2024
I love this concept so much, the characters are very well explained and developed keep up the good work the storyline is very well executed and Cleary very thought out ... -
Re: On Halloween night, your “love” brings such a fright
I love this concept so much, the characters are very well explained and developed keep up the good work the storyline is very well executed and Cleary very thought out ...
Oct 29, 2024