Lynnea

Wow! That's all I can say. You did really good job at writing this congrats. I mean it was awesome sentence structure stong, I couldn't find any grammar or spelling ...

Lora opened her eyes and bolted upright in her bed. Her body was shaking and covered in sweat. She began taking deep breaths to calm her. Like she feared, it ...

Thanks so much for everyone's input so far. It's really helping. Ill go back through the chapter soon and edit what is posted above but feel free to keep commenting!

This is the first chapter to "Under the Moonlight". I may add more to this chapter later on since it kinda short and title may change, I'm not quite sure. ...