Lynne

hey. I absolutely it. your style and phrasing fit the piece perfectly. my favorite line is your opening. its beautiful. -lynne

that was actually hysterical. normally I don't like parodies, but this was well done. I liked it. good job.

hey. this is hysterical. I love the irony and the sardonic twinge you give it. you make it seem so painful and depressing in the start, but the twister makes ...

Thank you so much for the input. :] And, no i don't really do much poem writing, I'm more inclined to novels or short stories. But thanks again, i appreciate ...