Lynne

Please do your worst critiquing. I'm just starting writing and really curious if i can do anything that makes it worth continuing and sharing it with anyone other than my ...

Wars. Violent. Passionate. Completely and utterly rash. Nonsensical. Stupid. Why the hell, Would you do this? I'm sorry. I don't understand. This is thoroughly absurd. You could die; For a ...

Fly Well, Cherie, there's one decent thing Coming out of this goodbye; You will soon Be able to fly. Don't worry that I'll still be here- Crying as your wings ...

Any and all critiquing will be appreciated and treasured. Mile-marker Zero Orange faded to pink, Pink deepened to rose. Water glisened; Sand cast shadows in on itself, Ridges trying to ...