Lymphatic_rebellion

there's this coffee, Christianity, and a boy. I just don't understand their significance. Is this poem comparing the coffee to the boy? Do the narrator and the boy enjoy drinking ...

I. 1. Living between each-other’s cracks, #What sort of crack's does the narrator speak of? 2. my insides are massaged by 3. these impermanent curves. #The narrator is having a ...

Jason had a thin red beard that had somehow managed to cling to his smooth, yuppie complexion. He was not well-built, but not slight either, and his voice had all ...

I agree that you need more description. The imagery could be improved and made more appealing to the senses. The progtagonist seems to have a huge deficit of emotion. His ...

The original title strikes me. Without the hint of Samsara I wouldn't have had any idea what you were talking about. Samsara, or ignorance of the true self, is the ...