LydiaB

sauce

hmm... really? I don't mind tag-cutting as long as it's a conversation between two characters... but that might just be me.

suntan

"said" isn't an annoying word unless you overanalyze it (such as what typically happens when people are editing writing, myself included). Using words like "laughed" "growled" "grumbled" shouldn't tak

muffins!

Okay, now here's the first part of the first chapter. Much of it was written before, so it could use a lot of work and any suggestions for improvement would ...

Cutting it in half is probably good, seeing as that is what the editor will probably tell you anyway. Just make sure the first part has a decent ending and ...

life

I would write it down again because I memorized it. It's my favorite book, after all. What would you do if someone erased and/or burned your writing?

water dragons ^.^

^ I know what you mean ^ You know you're a writer when you put down a book halfway and think of an ending and get mad when you read ...

swimming

Anyone else?

foot

I would love to help you edit it. I'm obsessed with fantasy, so... -Lydia