LydiaB

Light_Devil: Shall we just proceed and have newcomers catch up? There's not too much to catch up on and really they can have their characters enter as one of the ...

I'm currently reading 'The Freedom Writer's Diary". I really loved the movie and the story as a whole is just... amazing. I recommend reading it or watching it to anyone ...

Hello, I'm here to [s]ruthlessly rip apart[/s] review your story!!! The Kings Opal I'm assuming that "Kings" is showing possession and not multiple kings here... In which case it should ...

(Wait... Am I that pole of a person??) Imelda -Thespian Imelda continued to eat her lunch, the other Neutrals occasionally giving her a glance, but not engaging her in conversation. ...

I haven't! *waits* Perhaps you should put that we need members in the title/subtitle, Light-Devil.

Name: Imelda Anderson Age: 14 School/Job: Private School / writing Personality: Tends to be an introvert and observes social interaction more than she takes part in it. She is very ...

(I hope it's okay that she takes various kinds of classes...?) Imelda -thespian The corners of Imelda's lips tipped up slightly in amusement as she walked out of the thespian ...

Plots are moved around by the characters, no the other way around. I prefer clichéd plots because no matter what, as long as the story isn't a complete copy of ...

Hello, I'm here to review *cheers* But I'm not going to be doing nit-picks this time *gasps* Instead, I'm going to be concentrating on the more in-depth aspects of your ...

(I am lost... :D) Name: Imelda Firestone Country: America Age: 12 Appearance: Imelda doesn't look unlike an average eleven-year old girl. She is slightly tall for her age and is ...

(Light_Devil: Fay really doesn't have, like, any control over it right now anyway ;) It might not seem useful, but I already have that worked out. By the way, I ...

But the fact that said is such an easy word to skim over makes it a good word to use if you want to keep the action moving, but sometimes ...

Filler titles. Filler titles are awesome. Just take the basic concept of your idea and turn it into a title, then ignore it and move on! And if someone says ...

I currently have the exact same problem :( I haven't written in a dedicated way since summer vacation. I actually think that my particular problem is because of my tension ...

Hey, gimme back my fire :( (:P) Maybe doing something else altogether would be better? "The guilt gnawed away at me and I feared that I would soon be consumed. ...