Lydia1995

Hello JC, Thanks, I just thought that this would be pretty bad, grammerwise. I have never been much cop at grammer. But maybe being on this site has improved it ...

The worst book I have ever read has got to be Great Expectations by Charles Dickens (Sorry Dickens fans...) It was exceptionally dull.

Thanks Amy, Maybe you are right, I'll have a think about it! :D See you in chat some time :D ~Lydia

Thanks Midnight, and yes it is what happens before. All your other questions should be cleared up. I'll tell you when I write more! :D

Hello BondGirl, Thanks for your feedback. The voicemails were people who were ringing the phones of the dead people and of course they cant reply. It was an idea I ...

Hello again, as you requested I re-read this and I have to say that I really liked it. You improved it and you made a more clear subject shine through. ...

@Kyousuke Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it. I will PM you the next chapter. It dosn't matter if you don't read Chapter one because its more of a prologue ...

Thanks guys for your comments. As for my inspiration... I live in Cornwall and many people refer to the surf as the white horses. You know like when it crashes ...

@Anna Yep you have it sussed, you will find out those thing s later as this was my intention though I may have to adapt this chapter because it appears ...

I agree, I really think that you would be good at writing poetry because you have a very poetic way of writing and you use some very good words. You ...

I really liked this well done, It was easy to tell that you were talking to a cat and the repetition with Emerald eyes was very good and made it ...

@Grin Thanks for your feedback You question about why Lila is getting hung should become clear later, you are asking the very question I wanted the audience to ask. Thanks ...