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Samrai (First Installment)
Hello all, I just thought that I would post this small amount of another book that I'm giving a go here. I would appreciate your feedback even if its just ...
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The Riders - Prologue
Re-draft complete you can find the new version in Fantasy FictionHello all,Nit-picks are most welcome Prologue:I crouched on the floor, examining the tracks. They were fresh which meant the horses ...
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The Riders - Prologue (Re-Draft)
Ok, so I took your advice and worked with it and here is the result Thanks to everyone who commented before, I would appreciate any further improvements.Prologue: I crouched on ...
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Run Short Prologue.
Hello. I am really stumped as to which idea to carry on with at the moment out of the numerous prologues I seem to be writing. This is another, if ...