Lydia

A small baby boy lay in a yellow Moses Basket, with a furry baby blue blanket over him to keep him warm. I don't think that you actually need the ...

"Bubby I'll be right back, I promise." Jay told his son after he had dropped him off in his kindergarten class. "No daddy don't leave." Jason said clinging to his ...

Wow. I really liked it! I liked the way you described things, the way it was worded, the way it was layed was excellent! This piece was really good! I ...

In my house there are two rules: follow the rules, and don’t get caught if you don’t. (Wait...you just said there were only two rules and one was follow the ...

Chapter 3 All of the guests were transported to the reception Alice had organized. We hadn’t arrived yet because Alice thought we should enter a few minutes after everyone had ...

All I want for Christmas… (A short story) I undid the ribbon and tore off the wrapping paper to find a navy blue box. I think it should be untied ...

I am a new member and this is my first time reviewing something so I'll try my hardest. I think that you have many strengths and weaknesses. You have some ...