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@Skins Thanks so much for the feedback! I added in all your edits to my original copy and I'm working on a few other things before I repost :) @Suzanne ...

Oh, also another point. I think you should make a decision as to whether you're going to concentrate on his family seeing him as invisible, or the fact he doesn't ...

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I've edited a few things and reposted, but there are still some edits I am working on. @shubhilovestowrite You know, it's funny, the reason I ...

@darkangel_05 my favourite pokemon are Eevee and Jigglypuff. I can't choose between the two hehe! I like Vulpix too :) I don't have anymore Pokemon stories, but I do have ...

Thanks so much for all the feedback! You may be surprised to hear that I am GLAD to hear bad feedback! Basically, as I said I wrote this many years ...

Thanks for the comments everyone! I may add more to the dialogue, the reason I didn't was because I was takind the dialogue exactly from the movie, but I take ...

No problem! Feel free to use the ideas I suggested or not to use them, it's your choice :) But you should definitely keep writing and NEVER delete things, because ...

Just re-edited :) May submit another chapter if people like it!

Hi Evi :D It's funny you pointed out the "terrific happenings" line because that was the main reason I submitted the poem for crit hehe! Originally the line was "what ...

Well, I don't see how I story set in the past can't be historical fiction and that usually means sticking to the period with extensive research... so honestly I would ...

Aww no replies :( I wrote it when I was like 10 though when Pokemon was huge haha! So I guess I'm not too disheartened :P

Awesome! My play for my playwriting class has to be in on April 30th, so I'm going to join this to try to encourage me to write! I couldn't do ...

Are you sure this is in the right section? Surely this should be in the fiction section? I could be wrong....

Aww you're so gracious, and very talented for an 11year old or otherwise :)

Just to clarify, when I said 'where do you live?' it was rhetorical, I was aware he was from the US. I just meant that the price he stated seemed ...