Lurlene_Mcdaniel_Rox

I tought it was really good but it was a little jumpy. there were a few mistakes like -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- She taught how

HEyy I thought it was pretty good there was a few spelling mistakes but it was overly good and srry but i need points to post m y story I ...

Heyy I think that it is more like a summary too, I found it quite boring the beginnign didn't catch me like the begginning was just kinda boring I want ...

Heyy There is parts where it could be better like when you said he was beautiful most guys are hot not beutufily or handsom and it could be improved a ...

Heyy Wow that is pretty good you have been on her for like sooo long u were like the second person to post a story wehn did you discover this ...