Lukacena

Thanks! The goal was meant to get you to see they are two minds in one body. They're two different spirits, so what Clarissa sees, may not be what the ...

Thanks! At least this part is better than my first.

I'll certainly keep that in mind. Personally, I think the second chapter is better. I hope you'll think that when I post it! Thank you!

Thanks. At first, I didn't want to add any at all. But, thank you!

Sorry about that. I had originally decided to have no dialogue at all - just fill the story with suspense - but I had felt the chapter would be too ...

Thanks. To be honest, I didn't like how the story turned out in the first place. I wrote it for fun a while ago, but since my friends told me ...