Lucky_Duck

That was really good... I love soup! :D -- Lucky

Thank you for the advice, kitty. :) I changed the story up a bit, for the better, I hope. :? Oh well, I am sure you advice prevailed. Thank You!!!!!!!!! ...

Ok, I was going to say what everyone else said about the forced rhyming, yadda, yadda, yadda. I really liked the imagery that you described. Over all, it was a ...

Hey, that was really interesting, it describes so much in such little context. I still don't know what racecar has to do with it, oh well, i'm sure you had ...

Thanks you guys for all the advice, I am sure that it will help me in the future writings that i have planned. Oh, and OregonGirl, I am really glad ...