Young Writers Society

Hey enjeru! Another chapter, I see. It was good and, like nariel said, it was just a little choppy. I like Edward better (after New Moon, I wanted to kick ...

9/10 it's so cute!

Ooh!!! Ooh!! *points finger* It's a new member!! Yay *claps hands* I am also a poet! can't wait to hear from ya! --Lucky

9/10 that's pretty funny

10/10 I love t, it's really cool

I actually think that you should get rid of the 'La la la la...' thing... It just bugs me. Anyway, I agree with starry about the descriptions... Hope you have ...

That is really cool, I liked the third one the best. I really like your style. You know how pictures just look too perfect if it's clear, it has to ...

I heaved a deep sigh and closed my eyes. Butterflies flew through my stomach as I waited on the anticipated moment. My mom came rushing beside me as she noticed ...

Maybe.... Do chickens dance?

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I love Vampire stories!! Which you can tell by my avatar. I love Edward Cullen!! --Lucky

Granted but it burns your tongue and you can't eat/drink anything until the swelling goes down I wish that I had a horse

Hey, welcome!*glomps* Nice to meet you! Hope you have fun here!! --Lucky

Hey welcome to YWS, the home of wonderful writers, artists, and much more. I'm Lucky... or you could call me Ducky... either one is fine with me. Hope you enjoy ...

That was funny... It seems to me that we don't get very many limericks around here. Good job Mesh and Mesh's mom!! --Lucky