LuckyStar

Hiya Kamas! Reviewer here, as requested! Well. I don't really have anything to say about it, except for the fact that it was pretty confusing. The first part wasn't but ...

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FRED IS BACK!

Saffron Saffron stood in front of her mirror, brushing out her short hair, straightening her uniform, and making sure her bow was in place. Just as she was pulling out ...

Hey guys! Here's something I found, and I really hope you like it! A drunk man in an Oldsmobile They said had run the light That caused the six car ...

Hey Fly! What I noticed here was that you had a LOT of G.U.M.S errors. If I point them all out, this review would be way too long. I also ...

I agree, it's very original. What I did like about it was how you did your syllables. They got longer and longer within a stanza and it stayed consistent. Keep ...

Oh. My. Gosh. I'm a very nit-picky person, and I can find tiny little things wrong in almost everything I read. But this-this is FLAWLESS. The way the words flow, ...

Hiya Samsal! My name is Star, and I'll be your reviewer for today! I was thinking a few things here. The first one was that you probably threw this together ...

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Name: Saffron Age: 20 Appearance: She's 5' 8 and rather thin. Long legs and arms, and a curvy body. Clumsy and tends to break her glasses a lot, and forgets ...

Hi guys! My name here is LuckyStar, in real life, my name is Star, and you can just call me Star :D. So, I'm a laid back almost-thirteen-year-old girl who ...

Well, I was born on July fifth. So naturally, my mom named me Star. She always called me Lucky, though, because bad things never happened to me. Recently I found ...

Wow! This was a great poem! I really liked the expression and feeling in it. It's short and quick, but it's amazing how much you squeezed in! I can't wait ...