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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: His Mistake

    I like that the whole time in the poem you are pretty much blaming him and saying that he hasn't been that great, but then at the end, by allowing ...

    Apr 17, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The most beautiful eyes

    I like the poem. One part that... i guess i got stuck on was that you use the word illusion twice. I don't know, it could just be me but ...

    Apr 17, 2007


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins