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LuckyCeltic17

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: His Mistake

    I like that the whole time in the poem you are pretty much blaming him and saying that he hasn't been that great, but then at the end, by allowing ...

    Apr 17, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The most beautiful eyes

    I like the poem. One part that... i guess i got stuck on was that you use the word illusion twice. I don't know, it could just be me but ...

    Apr 17, 2007


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening