LuckiestLoser

I do quite like this poem. I like the structure alot and the way you have singled out certain lines. I really love the opening to the poem aswell: It ...

I agree with BFG the first two stanzas don't really hold my attention and seemed slightly ordinary, but i really did love the last line. I like how it sounds ...

I thought this was a very good poem. You managed to write about something quite controversial without making it sound too innapropriate. From the title i didn't expect to read ...

thanks guys! :) and thanks armadian for pointing out those little spelling mistakes. I guess i didn't read over it properly... critiques much appreciated :)

I thought this was well written and very good. It really seemed to get inside the head of the girl in the poem. Whether intentional or not, I think your ...

This is the first poem i've written in..well...ever. I'm not sure about some of the words and it probably needs some work but I just wanted some feedback. Im also ...

I really like this. I think it captures what most people at some point feel, but don't know how to say. I also really like the structure and the way ...

I have to say I really enjoyed this and I don't know whether it was your intention or not, but it read like Harry Potter and I think you captured ...

I really liked this. I think it read like the actual Harry Potter books. It made me want to keep reading more like Rowling does ever so well. The only ...

do the BB codes work in the biography section on your profile? because i tried to use them and nothing just showed up as text in one big paragraph along ...

new to all this. I've been on the site a few times and its always appealed to me, so i finally decided to join. I've read a few peoples short ...