LucianoTong

I like this quite a lot, it's simple but effective. There are some flaws though: I skipped the second and third paragraphs without even realising, and when I looked again ...

Just like Paracosm said, "it read like a strange dream," but as if you were telling it to someone, remembering details as you went along: "Barefoot. That's what I was." ...

This is definitely very different from anything else I've ever read! There are many things I like about the piece: I found it intriguing from the start, thanks to that ...