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Thanks heaps, yeah im not so good with grammar. Im learning slowly. The bird cant fly in the house. Ill make that clearer in an edit. Not enough room. Thanks ...

Hey thanks man. Ill let you know that my idea is that they are in a town, surrounded by walls, keeping out whatever is trying to get in at nightfall ...

Clever. Funny how sometimes looking for the story can become the story itself. Clever work.

Ill definately let you guys know when i am going to post some more. Well into the first chapter now so when ive finished ill likely post it.

Thank you :). I'll apply it from now on.

Thank you guys. I really appreciate your comments. It's my first attempt at writing ever, well not including school. I agree it needs to be split up, but i have ...