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yeah i did sorta rush through that "insanity" part so to speak, i do want to go through this entire story and rework it i guess would be the right ...

that is true, for example people tend to think to kill a mockingbird is brilliant while i think its garbage, but the thing about my story is that it really ...

this is already a long story, the entire series called the living abyss has to do wiht this. i only posted this cause i needed a bit of information out ...

no its under novel/chapter

i have no idea what you said at all. this isnt even a poem. there is absolutely nothing usefull to me in what you just wrote. thanks?

thanks really glad you like it

i-im honestly not sure why i havent 1. responded to this amazingly helpfull reveiw or 2. not made any of the changes. i mean holy damn the way you rephrased ...

more or less yeah :P but i didnt want to make it boring to read either

haha thanks X3 glad you liked it ^^

yeah eric is going there soon actually :P he is in a different story, same universe though naturally. but yeah i needed to write this mostly to be able to ...

thanks man :D if you want to know more about this specific story, as in the one regarding eric, read the leather bound book and the living abyss, he is ...

hey, i have updated it now with the changes.

yeah the thing is, well first of all thank you for the feedback. i notice i keep messing up on the exact same stuff in every story XD anyway, eric ...

Thank you so much for this, also the Latin I%u2019m revisiting later, there is a reason for it :P the name is actually connect to a different story I%u2019m writing ...

i give this a out of 10