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Re: Night World-where anything and everything is possible-
Okay first of all this is a story about, at least, six teenagers trying to get out of the Night World. No the Night World is not a different dimension, ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Getting Life Back
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! First of all I think this is a very interesting piece, and if I'm correct, this is about a girl committing sucide because ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Empty
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! First I think that your poem was absolutely superb! I love the concept of it. There are no mistakes that I detected, but ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Kimi-ku
This story book is set on a world called the Unconscious. The plot of the story is that your characters is forced to join the tournament in which your character ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Nostalgia
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! ~I cannot help but ponder if of parts of our lives having the ability to overlap through time and space.~ Might want to ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Teddy Bear's Story
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! First of all I'd like to say that I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you write more. I really like ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Saved
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! Through the halls, I walk. This school has been my home for three years now. I've got nowhere to go; at least not ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Impossible You
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! Well first of all I think this is a very nice poem; you are very talented. I don't really see anything wrong with ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Teenage Disaster 6
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! ~ I'm looking at a picture of her and I swear her teeth are bigger than in the last picture of her I ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Chance- Chapter 1
Hi Miss Summer Night at your service ~I more or less live alone~ A comma should be placed in this sentence. Like maybe... ~I, more or less, live alone~ I ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: unseen
Yeah, but I need help because I'm not sure if i should just leave the "love is love to a heart that is pure" part out or find something else ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Nightly Terrors
Hey! Summer Night at you're service! Well, first I just wanted to say that this was very interesting to read. Second, I wanted to bring to attention this particular line: ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Heartless, a book im starting, please help with editing
Yes. I know. Very sorry. You see I write for fun, and often forget how important editing is. I should pay more attention to my work. Thank you for the ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: unseen
What is lost that cant be found? What is found that can't be tamed? Sometimes tamed but never controlled? Pumping fiercely with no name? What may shed the brightest light? ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Heartless, a book im starting, please help with editing
I know. I know. Im sorry, I sould have checked my work. -and by the way Summer Night is my real name :P-
May 18, 2009
