LovelessSummer

I was thinking of taking up photography, all I need is a camera. This was very nice! I really liked the angle and the focus. I'm not a photographer, yet, ...

Wow, this was nice, very emotional. I liked it. I didn't see any errors, but then again, I almost never do. Just pay attention to what you write and make ...

Yeah, sorry, I had that 'out' instead of 'our' problem in my story "Nanali". I seem to make that mistake a lot. I am working on it though, thanks for ...

Hi! I really liked this. It's a true story you say? Well that only makes me want to read it more. You did have a few errors, though. "I was ...

Well, I noticed you don't have any reviews, try to fix that. This was nice, I really enjoyed reading it. I'm sorry I don't have time to correct any mistakes ...

Yeah, sorry. :oops: I type 'out' why I try to put 'our' lots of times. It's a problem I have.

This is an idea that came to me while sitting in a very draining health class. Tell me what you think and comment please! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: I would really ...

Wow this was very good! Its Summer, by the way, nice to meet you. I didn't see very many grammatical errors. The only thing that bothered me a bit was ...

Part two of Missing Autumn. I'm writing this in a different style. To help you better understand imagine the MC, Slay, talking to you and telling you her story. Well, ...

I know how you feel. When I was new I didn't want to put up my work because I thought it would be utter garbage. I had a lot of ...

This was really good. I didn't see any mistakes, but I almost never do. I think everyone else covered your errors already though. I can't stay long because i have ...

Should I put this under Romantic Fiction?

I liked this I just wish it was longer, but there are a few things. 1. I didn't know what it meant, or even who Kayla was. This sentence was ...

The first part of a story I'm starting! My others 'Schizophrenia' and 'Dear Juliet' are going under private construction. :smt005 So, I am proud to present, Missing Autumn. Enjoy! - ...

Well, I wasn't sure about this, at first, and I knew I shouldn't judge books by their cover. I'm glad i didn't. This was amazing! It had me giggling and ...