LovelessSummer

I found this while recycling some of my old papers. Tell me what you think of it. Please! --- It will be dark, and It will be cold No warm ...

This has been going on since I was a Novice! Im so glad to see you have such dedication! I just wanted to stop in and say gratz! You should ...

This was very nice to read! I actually really liked it. I really didn't see any major mistakes, but that semicolon in the first paragraph bothered me. It's probably correct ...

I put chapter -1 because I didn't want to call it a prologue or preface. I think that's what they call the little chapter before chapter one, but I'm choosing ...

That was spectacular! I really liked it! The title is what drew me in. (I know I'm such a pervert!) I've never read anything like this, it was unique. I ...

Mo already covered the grammar issues so all I have to say now is, this was very good. I enjoyed reading this! It kept me on the edge of my ...

Okay, I know you may be new, but don't ever use idk in your stories, or something like that. Okay? This was good, I saw no major grammar issues, but ...

Part three of Nanali, which I currently re-named Shadow Kissed. Enjoy, and please comment! --- Nanali lay in the bush Nyx deposited her in. Several woodland animals gathered around, pawing ...

Hello! I'll be reviewing your work today! "Thank you for seeing me on short notice , " the young man said as soon as D r. F oreman let him ...

This was awesome! Beautiful! I love goddess Nyx more than anything and this title pulled me in like quicksand! I saw no mistakes and that just made this better! If ...

Wow! This was different, I don't think I've ever read a story in the perspective of a dragon. This held my attention from begging to end and i am craving ...

Just try to put in more detail on your characters, surroundings, and the situation, and you should be okay. Try rewriting this and re-posting, and when you do message me. ...

This is good, I really liked it. I spotted a few common errors here and there. Just a few, but make sure you double check your work. I'll remember to ...

Wow, I really liked this. I didn't see any mistakes, but just remember to double check your work anyway. Is this a short story or a novel? I would really ...

Part two of Nanali . So far the path in going with this story is: Nanali is forced to join the human world and she is smarter and more powerful ...