LovelessSummer

Part six of Shadow Kissed! I'm a bit stuck on what should happen next from here. Suggestions welcome! Enjoy. --- She woke up in a bright white room, having to ...

If I could I would teach you to play guitar! But that is kinda impossible. Ha ha! XOXOXOXOXOXO Summer Night

This was beautiful! I'm so touched that you would write this for your friend! I only saw one part that looked funny: "Does not she know," Did you mean does ...

I revised it, I hope this version is better! Thanks for the advice spring and Kamas! It really helped a lot. XOXOXOXO Summer Night

Okay, to be honest, and I don't know if I'm the only one, but I'm really confused! I don't know what's happening! So, because of my lack of understanding, I ...

A short poem I wrote one November night. Enjoy! ---- Hostile glares and painful stares, point the gun but keep it there. Torturing dreams and sleepless nights, his face and ...

Okay, first of all, I was thinking about changing the title. I don't like the original title that much, so if you could please leave a comment giving me a ...

I'll definitely stick around for part two! This was very good. I agree with Stella on most parts, but I'm also glad to see you did actually read over your ...

This was really good and I'm glad to be the first to comment! I saw no grammar mistakes and your vocabulary is just superb! I only saw one spot in ...

Hi, Summer here! Well, first of all, I really liked this! There are a couple of parts that bothered me though. Like this: She collapsed on the floor, shivering. She ...

Okay part four here! This is just really a set up for whats going to happen in part four. I've changed the direction of this story. Originally she was going ...

"This probably only appeals to Emo people." Wow I actually liked this, are you calling me emo? Nevermind, I'm dropping that subject. I would really love to hear this with ...

I'll rethink and re-post it later! Thanks for all your help really. I'll get to work on it right now. XOXOXOXO Summer Night

Yeah, like I said, I'm kinda new to this type of writing. I usually don't write things on this type of setting and plot. I'm trying something different. I am ...

Chapter 1 of "A few feet under". Tell me what you think of it. Like I said before, this genre is new to me, I've never written anything like this. ...