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Re: Shadow Valentine
**Starlet I looked up to see Andrew's worried face. I stood up and took a step away from her. "A-a-Andrew! I d-didn't mean to do it I mean...I don't know ...
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Re: Shadow Valentine
**Starlet** "Ms.Mansion!" I rolled my eyes and looked at the nurse that gave me my shots. I folded my arms and drug myself over to where she stood. "What the ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: How To Begin Your Summer
I almost died while reading this. On the scene where he wakes up in Eddy's room I didn't realize I was holding my breath until I started getting dizzy. And ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Valentine
Starlet** I stood by the door with my arms crossed over my chest, watching all the people get in line to receive their vaccines. I had already got mine, and ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: The Process of Figuring Myself Out (10/11/10) Part 2
Yay! *dances* :elephant: Part two! :smt005 Well, just like before, this was amazing! I loved it, and, plus, I only saw three minor mistakes: I, however, took refuge in my ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: The Process of Figuring Myself Out (10/11/10) Part 1
This was amazing! Thankfully someone already covered the one mistake I saw, so that gives me room to say: I can not wait until the next post comes out! Whatever ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Valentine
My second storybook! I'm on a winning streak. :smt005 Okay, yeah I'm joining this one too! Name: Starlet Mansion Age: 16 Personality: Quiet and mysterious, she doesn't speak unless spoken ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: FireFlies Chapter 1 part 4
Wow, you've got me hooked! Poor Ollie! I feel so bad for her. Being kicked out of the table is a big deal. I can hardly wait until the next ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Ever written a story with no humans?
Aww sad face! I won't get to read the bunnies and monster truck story? That makes me super sad. Oh well, I'll get over it. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO Summer Night
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Ever written a story with no humans?
Carnivorous goats?! Holy crap! Gosh, that's interesting. I'm thinking of making my no-human story about the life of a baby bobcat.
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Kalu, Newborn Spirit
This was good! I really want you to post more because I want to find out what animal Kalu will become! :smt005 Well, that's all. I saw no mistakes. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Ever written a story with no humans?
Bunnies with monster trucks? You have got to let me read that! I'm serious, that story sounds so good and funny. I haven't written a story without humans or humanoid ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: End the Pain pt.2
Suddenly I was looking down at myself: my lifeless body lay sprawled across what seemed like a cave floor. How did I get in a cave anyway? Elana had thrown ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: End the pain
Fixed it! Hope it's better now.
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Typical Teens 3
**Slayer** I jerked my head up from my previous sleeping position on the desk. Ms.Karing was yelling at some Spade guy for sleeping. He should have taken the back seats, ...
Nov 25, 2009
