LovelessSummer

Wow, this is really...though out. I like your determination. Names are really important and I think you really expanded on that. I just usually use whatever comes to mind first. ...

I choose Other. There was this one book that I read a good five chapters in before throwing it to the piranhas. I noticed it was moving really slow and ...

"Do it!" , she says, with her heart still beating in her hands. "Eat it Vataar." What the H-E-Double hockey sticks? Why is he eating her heart? She needs that ...

Hello, Forever! Just little ol' me here to review your story. Well, let's start. A year, in reality, is not a particular amount of years, days, and weeks. A year ...

She hides her petty face, I'm confused as to if you meant pretty or was it supposed to be petty ? and covers up the pain. Her straightened curls disguise, ...

Hello, Iceprincess! Not to be repetitive, but this was adorable ! Teddy, I’m sorry, but I don’t think Mummy’s afraid of ghosts, much less people dressing up as ghosts. She’s ...

Hi, I'm Loveless! How are you doing today, darling? I love Avatar, but I don't think it counts as an Anime. Sad, I know. Well, anyway, welcome! I love archery ...

Hello! Loveless here to review your story. Well, let's get started. "Catherine?" A voice startled her and she whipped around, a little harsher than she intended . " C an ...

Hello again, Al3xx. Loveless here to review this amazing story you have created. As always, corrections in red, suggestions and comments in purple. Well, let's get started. I tried to ...

Hello, Gothic! I have a Victorian style home...does that count? Ha ha! It's not cool to laugh at your own jokes, Love. Yes, I know. Ah-hem... Welcome to YWS, I ...

Hello, darling! Welcome to YWS. You came upon this lovely sight at a very good time. There are so many new things here, it's improved a lot since I first ...

Hi, Loveless here! I'm going to be review your story today. First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope your time here will be fantastic. Haha, anyway, i'm wasting time. ...

Hello, Austenite! Loveless here to review your story. The things in green are removals. I sat in the small economy seat of the Qantas plane, playing with the model airplane ...

Okay! I'm here to review. Red= Corrections Purple= Suggestions/ Comments The unfriendly eyes of half the student body stared up at me from the aisle seats down below; I couldn't ...

Yay, chapter one! Okay, I will give this a full review, just not right now. I'm not even allowed to be on my computer right now. When I get back ...