LovelessSummer

First I'd like to say: Welcome to YWS! May your stay here be as wonderful as a Panda bear eating a banana nut muffin! This was well written, very nice ...

Hi, Loveless here to review your little, mini story, passage...thing. This was short, but it seems like a good opening to a story. The word teeth in the first sentences ...

Haha, on the first of next month you are all mine! This is such a cool game and it's so ridiculosly cute how you stood up in class and did ...

Ha ha! This may be the funniest thing I've read all day! You should really start a blog though, it would be more approiate. Aside from the whole to blog ...

Hi, Loveless here! This was a nice poem; it sent out a really good, thoughtful message. The tone of it was set very nicely, well, I think it was. It ...

When I write I listen to/sing differnt things. My favirotes are Circa Survive, Aiden, Scary kids scaring kids (Sksk), The maine, and many more. If I'm writing a angry, emotional ...

Hello, Fries! You had a good concept; a wonderful message, one that someone could really ponder over. Though the message is wonderful, your rythm is off. It didn't flow very ...

Hello, Tashi! Loveless here! You used these ---> "..." way to much. There is a such thing called a comma, it can replace those many times in your story. The ...

Ofir, congradulations! This was amazing; full of emotion, power, and a harsh sense of reality. It really shows how people change as they get older. Your character was very developed, ...

I wouldn't want to be famous either. It's too much pressure, and I don't like being watched. You have to think and re-think your every move. Some people as kids ...

Welcome to YWS, Ktg! Nice to see another new face around here. The rules are pretty simple, not that hard to follow at all. Things like: Use correct grammar. Be ...

Wow, Dreamy, your discovery of the expanded smilies was breath taking! I'm so proud of you *sniffles*. But your computer is being a very mean stink butt for not letting ...

Psh, i'll join. Name: Skygrazer Identity: Kaily Juner, a college student. Works at the Hot Topic in the mall. Power: Can manipulate her body into anything that she touches. (If ...

Well, I don't know about anyone else, but I take the term "emo" very offensivly. And I'm prepared to give a speech about said word. *clears throat* Emo is taken ...

*Yes, I know I'm bringing up old passages.* In my opinion the death penatly is just wrong. In my religion we have a saying, "All life is sacred." I think ...