LovelessSummer

Hahahahahahaha! Lena! Oh wow! You're so sick and wrong. You know I didn't mean it in that sense. So immature and perverted. Are you sure you're older than me? Anyway, ...

Woo, this is better! More developed, paced a bit more evenly, and your characters are profiled well. Though I had to take three breaks when reading this it was worth ...

Um, Whea. This isnt...a story. And it's old. It is just a bunch of emotions pushed together because-. Wheadee *sigh*. This was meant for the Non-Ficton thread and-. Wow. This ...

I'm sorry, I can't even attempt to read this. It's way too long-I find myself saying this a lot-. I'm sure this edited version is wonderful, I believe I've read ...

Ha, nevermind! They went home. Okay, so where did I leave off? Okay, so I finished reading this whole thing. I tried to read it all in one sitting-this was ...

*He looked up at me and to my I looked down...* To your what? *log-cabin-(l)ike* *snowy capped Mountains ski resort* If Snowy Capped Mountains is the name of the resort ...

Okay, since everyone else corrected the few mistakes I saw, I'm just going to review you on the story itself. The beginning was nice and very descriptive. I love the ...

Okay, here's what I do: Write a bunch of things down on a piece-or in my case a lot of pieces- of paper. Don't think! Only write. Just let your ...

Ah, Matt, simply your name bring tears to my eyes! This poem was amazing, though I think part of the last stanza seemed kind of forced. I didn't read as ...

Yes, you took my advice! Sweet. Nice to see you again, Billy Jack! Voice actor? That's so awesome! And, don't worry, you'll fit in here just fine! I can hardly ...

"I've got a good one for 'ya," Master pulled me off the floor by my collar and held me against the side of his body. " Fourteen, shaved, and hella ...

Hi, Loveless here! I hope your day has been filled with Panda bears and muffins! Haha! Ben, my friend, I'm sure your story is just overflowing with brilliance, but it ...

Hello, Emi! Loveless here! Well, you have a minor capatilazation issue. You sometimes used caps in the middle of the sentence, forgot to put caps on proper nouns, and at ...

Well, I don't have five books, but I do have one. Rapunzel-or however you spell her name-. I hate that book! She makes women seem helpless and she's the typical ...

Number two and number six! Definately! You must choose those, they are simply beautiful! Well, I suppose I like number four also. Two, six, and four! Wait, only two? Well, ...