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Re: The Toy Box (The Thread Is Closed)
I save for a guy.
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Of The Zombies
Archer- "Happy birthday!" I rolled my eyes at my overly excited friends and blew out the candle on my birthday hot dog. "Yay," I said sarcastically, "can I just finish ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Random.
Hello, Ree. First picture: I love that you put this in Sepia, it gives it a really classical look. The captions were funny and serious at the same time. It ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Of The Zombies
Spot claimed. Half a profile is already posted.
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Of The Zombies DT
Name: Archer Blake Age: 19 Gender: Male Appearance: History: He was at Wasdap with a few of his friends, celebrating his nineteenth birthday. He first noticed the zombie outbreak happening ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: The Photo Album
Hello, ReisePiecey! Is this true? If so, your little sister is hilarious! They only problem I have if they way you make Kielan say "momma". I guess it can be ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Swimming Against the Kolyma River (edited)
I will review this but I must go for now.
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: When Night Falls
Hello, Reise. Loveless here to give this a review. Blood splattered the white porcelain floor, staining the glossy tiles a dark and bitter red. This is a nice opening line. ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Greetings from Reise! Heh.
Hello, Reise! Loveless here but my real name is Summer. Welcome to YWS, there is so much to offer here. Just start clicking around the site and if you have ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Elemental Thirteen (Rewrite) Chapter 1
Hello Forest! Loveless here to review your story. Well, let's get started. Corrections will be in red, comments and suggestions will be in purple. Ember wiped the sweat away from ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Yearning
Hello, Forest! Loveless here to give this poem of yours a review. My lips ache For a gentle kiss To be placed upon my lips Repetition of 'lips' in this ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: I'll Never Understand(edited)
Hello, Scream. Loveless here to review this story of yours. Well, let's get started. “Momma,” I said bravely, “Why don’t you tell on Uncle Rob for being so mean all ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Why Do We Hate Pit Bulls?
I agree with you. Pit bulls attack just as much as any other dog attacks, you have the same probability of being attack by a loose Yorkie on the street ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Fade
Hello, Sheperd! I'll be reviewing this for you, okay? Well, let's get started. Corrections will be in red and comments and suggestions will be in purple. Three days had passed, ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Mocking Bird.
Hello! Loveless here to review your story. Well, let's get started. “Hush, little baby, don't you cry,” She sang quietly, “Momma's gonna buy you a mocking bird...” Lowercase the 'S' ...
Jul 29, 2010
