Lovekills_period

I like it SO much better now that you have a second draft. It's light, and airy, and despite the fact that the story is sad, the poem doesn't strike ...

Thank you for the input. My biggest literary downfall was the epiphany one day that when writing, one does not have to use perfect punctuation and grammar like I was ...

By far the best poem in my opinion I've read lately. I really like it. You're a far better poet than me.

An optimistic poem. Even diehard pessimists and realists (i.e. me) can apreciate it... Most of the time when I talk about opportune moments, they are ones that I drastically failed. ...