LoveOnTheFringe

I think you are confused. This forum is for lyric poetry, not lyrics. There is a seperate forum for lyrics, lyric poetry is poetry that shares a musical effect when ...

Excellent! I love your choice to make this a short poem because the lesson is so simple and so poignent. Excellent. But just because I had a couple rough reviews ...

The changing of a ryhme scheme CAN work and it has been utlized, but it is difficult to pull a reader into a poem when the first stanza has no ...

I do agree with the previous poster in the sense that both the repetition and symbolism of "be sorry for that broken tree was stimulating." I think if there is ...