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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Jazz Minne

    HEY! I thought that this had a good plot but it was confusing because of the text "wall." I think I would break it up into paragraphs to make it ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Fate Worse Than Death

    1.) I thought that this poem was sheer guenious! The line What news is worse than that of death? was brilliant! 2.) It took me a while to completely understand ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Frustration

    HEY! I really, really , loved reading this. It gave a good clear picture and it can relate to alot of people. I'm super glad I found this and was ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: removed by author

    Hi! I don't write to much poetery but I do enjoy reading it. I liked the picture you were trying to paint, but I think it should be a little ...

    Feb 28, 2011


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