LostMoment

I can honestly say I loved the poem. My favourite part was ''Condemning you with every stare''. I found this a powerful line and thought out. As for your ending ...

I love it! GeeLyria already pointed out the punctuation problems, and apart from that it's great! However, I'm not a fan on how you ended it. ''but is the millions ...

That's a great poem! Well done! However, I think the beginning of the 3rd stanza doesn't flow as nicely as the others. ''But yet, had I have said what I ...

I enjoyed reading that however I think you should use less quotation marks, especially in the last stanza. Also I found it flew better in places then other parts, so ...

I think the best film I have ever seen is Titanic. It is a much loved film and they have some amazing actors! Leonardo DiCaprio is in and he acts ...