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Re: Soul of the Storm
I can honestly say I loved the poem. My favourite part was ''Condemning you with every stare''. I found this a powerful line and thought out. As for your ending ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Possible Worlds
I love it! GeeLyria already pointed out the punctuation problems, and apart from that it's great! However, I'm not a fan on how you ended it. ''but is the millions ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Contrite
That's a great poem! Well done! However, I think the beginning of the 3rd stanza doesn't flow as nicely as the others. ''But yet, had I have said what I ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: I
I enjoyed reading that however I think you should use less quotation marks, especially in the last stanza. Also I found it flew better in places then other parts, so ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Movie you have seen...
I think the best film I have ever seen is Titanic. It is a much loved film and they have some amazing actors! Leonardo DiCaprio is in and he acts ...
Oct 23, 2011