LostMoment

I'm back after about 5 months! Hopefully I'll be more active, haha!

I believe in Ghosts because there has been a lot of evidence that they exist and my Mum and Dad had an experience with one... I believe if you die ...

Mary Martin. Haha!

Love the World This world is extraordinary Too remarkable to be true Appreciation is what it needs As is gets older day by day On a clear summers night You ...

Arww thanks, and you!

Hahaha!

I can honestly say I loved the poem. My favourite part was ''Condemning you with every stare''. I found this a powerful line and thought out. As for your ending ...

I love it! GeeLyria already pointed out the punctuation problems, and apart from that it's great! However, I'm not a fan on how you ended it. ''but is the millions ...

Aw, glad you liked it! Okay, yeah I do kind of understand you, I'll keep that in mind when I next post a poem! Thanks :')

That's a great poem! Well done! However, I think the beginning of the 3rd stanza doesn't flow as nicely as the others. ''But yet, had I have said what I ...

I enjoyed reading that however I think you should use less quotation marks, especially in the last stanza. Also I found it flew better in places then other parts, so ...

Arw thanks for the advice!! I will keep that in mind for future poems, and I actually see where you're coming from and I agree!

Wow, thankyou so much! I'm also glad people can relate to it, that's what I was hoping would happen, but I wasn't sure! Thanks again! :)

I'm new! I made a welcome thread, and also posted a poem! I can't wait to get properly started though :)

Brilliant! Much, much better then what I could ever do!